Poem: Hell's Frozen Prison

DeadSkuLL DruMMer

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A few months back I wrote this and lots of friends say it's good so I thought I'd post it here and get your oppinions on it.

Hell'sFrozen Prison

I am taken to this winter hell,
Trapped inside my frozen cell,
Kept from everything I know,
Blocked out by this blinding snow,
Far from those I wish to hold,
To warm me from this winter's cold,
But casted so far away was I,
To this cursed land to freeze and die
 
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Excellent except the spelling error :p

I liked it, it was short but it had feeling and was well written. 10/10
 
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